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Dramatic Meeting

January 12th, 2009, 5:16 am

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Reply Xemik, January 12th, 2009, 10:36 am

They Finally Meet Our heroes meet in the heat of battle...It took an extremely long time to do this one, since i had to do so many things. (note, he cast Meteor in the upper panel if you didnt see that)

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Reply Xemik, January 21st, 2009, 1:26 pm

Thanks Luxiaj, and to everyone else, It seems as tho i wont be putting together another comic for a while because my computer crashed.....(im using the school computer), So sorry, i should have it fixed and have a comic up by the 23rd

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Reply Tasher, January 14th, 2009, 12:28 am

you truly have shown a knack for this style of sprites. You have a nice visual flare in your comic. My notes for you are definitely not on the visuals, you probably have surpassed me in that area, my notes are more on the script. It's nice and all, but you are introducing too many characters too quickly and forcing them into action. Try giving each new character about a page, considering you don't use many panels in your pages, to help express the ideas that you have for them. Flesh out the personality's in each character, then combined in the visual art, you are bound to have a work of art. At the moment it is a plot that is not really too strong, and to add on to that, everyone is in an unexplained battle. This can all be redeemed if you explain why all this has happened in the next few pages though. So in conclusion, superb MS paint skills, but you need a little script work. This is really good and i hope to see your face around more often.

Reply Xemik, January 14th, 2009, 10:22 am

i was actually going to do everything that you said Tasher, after the battle was over i was going to explain why it all happened and then get everyones backstory and such. (and i have the script all writen out at the moment and it gets alot better, i just stopped making big comics because it would take me hours to make [all the stupid copy and pasting :P])

oh and im not using MS Paint anymore, im using Paint.NET and Photoshop

Reply Tasher, January 14th, 2009, 9:30 pm

cool. It seems like the comic will look and script wise, turn out quite nicely. I'll keep an eye on this...

Reply Luxiaj (Guest), January 21st, 2009, 11:14 am

x3 I really like the comic so far! Great job. :3
I can't wait to see it progress~!

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